At one point I wrote,
It is confusing and not as clear as it needs to be. I have this thing about using the fewest words possible to say things, but sometimes I go way over and this is one case where I did.
This is the corrections I made,
- … centralized governance and ownership will destroy us. – Emphasis on centralized.
- Many folks seem to agree that we have to decentralize decision making, but that is not enough. We also have to decentralize ownership.
- I also changed I hope because it is not the same as I know.
- Also, I took out “(co-management)” and “(co-ownership)” to avoid confusion.
- We have to let wealth flow to the people who created it, based on their contributions. – The bit about “based on their contributions” is very important.
- We must move towards co-ownership as well as to co-management. – Changed it for clarity.
This is what I meant to write,